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Subject: Loneliness
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carynxxx 15.05.08 - 11:53pm
Black despair rips thru my heart, an ache that will not part. Loneliness self induced, i feel as if i am of no use. Sleep pls encompass me, take me to another realm. It feels so peaceful i just dont care. Could there be another cure, for my feeling so insecure? - all the poems i write are similar in that they r vry emotional. Is this a gud way to write poetry? I cant seem to write 'happy' poetry, many a time i hav tried. Ps let me know what u think of my poem. Thanx *
kellyb 21.05.08 - 03:19pm
hey its ok to write sad poems but your poem was ok bt still needs a lot of improvement *
evilgirl 7.06.08 - 06:05pm
I personaly tink dat ppl relate beta 2 sad poems..n wat u wrote was quite gud..keep up da gud wrk *
