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Subject: I miss u
Replies: 3 Views: 427
mischif7 2.03.08 - 06:36pm
My mind is on her. Like a goldfish with the 5 sec replay. She is the only one to make me merry and gay. Without her im lost. Like a compass missing the needle pointing north. When shes gone i feel vapid. But when im around her im coy and stupid. Tho she is the puzzle piece that fits by my vacant heart. I would give anything to be with her agen. This paper, this pen and even my inspiration......... *
mischif7 2.03.08 - 06:46pm
Ppl plz be gentle wit da crit, itz my first anti-dark/depressing poem *
d.dbelle 5.03.08 - 05:05am
Stryt to the point poem, not dat bad. U r a guy/gal of many words bt cant express ur feelings in poetry. Ok Right! *
mr_ken 11.03.08 - 03:36am
its a gud piece n jus coz its stryt forwad dosen descredt it. *
