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Subject: This lonesome heart
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mischif7 10.02.08 - 04:35pm
Alone in the dark, where nothin cn b heard. Hope searches for happines. To escape from being hurt. He sheds a tear inside. So no one wil knw he cried. Tho he doesnt exist coz 2 evry1 he died. if they opened their eyes theyd realise im alive..... *
mischif7 10.02.08 - 04:38pm
Ppl send in da crit nd if sum positive replies......arigatou gozaimasu *
ms_frost 10.02.08 - 09:17pm
It s interesting as a theme. Though it would be better if you insisted a bit more on the supernatural thing. People are always attracted to what they cant understand. May i say you re not the optimistic kind of a person, right? :) *
mischif7 11.02.08 - 11:07pm
U must hav read da otha poem, unfortunately im incapable of writing bright and sunny poemz, no joke *
ms_frost 12.02.08 - 12:54am
Ok.. Though i dont buy that you re incapable of writing such poems. I bet you have a whole diary with sailormoon s stories! :) *
mischif7 12.02.08 - 02:22pm
watz sailormoon diaries? *
ms_frost 12.02.08 - 05:06pm
What? Dont tell me you dont know sailormoon! The princess of moon. Worldwidely famous animation series. *
mischif7 12.02.08 - 05:53pm
My bd i realli dnt no *
d.dbelle 26.02.08 - 11:26am
Dats gud lines ryt there. I agree dat ppl r attracted to n understnd the practical better, bt a few understnd similes n al dat... those few are poets, most especialy those whov learned poetry. Ur poem's deep, u'r a real one. *
mischif7 27.02.08 - 07:17pm
Thanx so much, i jst write wat i feel tho i wouldnt think sum1 would giv such a reply......arigato *
