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Subject: Hi im a new poet Pls read this
Replies: 4 Views: 566
darkseth 6.02.08 - 07:32pm
Dreamers blues, the skies refuse, despite mattered hues, our souls infuse, the spirit ensues, wat mind eludes, the slf soars, to skies unexplored, pul the ripcord, sail thru air Lyk a sword, mind freed from thout, to escape discord, lying on a cloud, dreams profound, i pray o univers, let the pieces of my soul disperse. *
darkseth 1.04.08 - 07:23am
u no u Wana join my group 'cornrstreetsociety' atleast give it a look Hehe *
epicuth 1.04.08 - 04:00pm
Hey dude!ur poem hs sum gr8 imagery bt u should contextualise it mo da personification is leka zen bt kinda cold coz i duno wt u talkin bout hilite yr issue wit mo comparisons:)gudluk *
drromana 13.05.08 - 10:47pm
Very interesting. I liked it very much. you could explore the topic a little better tho, but I could pretty much follow it. *
carynxxx 16.05.08 - 12:07am
I think ur poem is really good. Keep on writing. I enjoyed it. *
