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Subject: My first poem
Replies: 2 Views: 366
mischif7 3.02.08 - 09:22pm
A soul wanting 2 wither away. I keep asking myself y should i stay. the only thingz left here are lies and empty promises. Be in my shoes and realise how this is. Living to feel pain within my heart. No cure for this pain, no hope left in me. If there is a speck of light dissappointment will visit agen and once agen pain there will be. So to end this cycle created since birth. I think itz time 2 leave this earth........ *
tommoe 7.02.08 - 05:26am
Its amazing 4 a first poem but it aint good, there r sum mistakes becoz u dnt knw alota words that rhymes bt i give u a congratulations. *
mischif7 8.02.08 - 02:19am
arigatou gozaimasu, byakuren hopefully i cn progress nd improve with the poetry *
