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Subject: MISS SUICID3
Replies: 5 Views: 437
darkwsh 5/30/2007 - 6:17:52
Footsteps down the halway floor, geting closer 2 my door, sweet death scent lingering al over me, i can taste her scent, shel close my eyes, my heart stops wit the touch of her hand, shes presses her dead lips against mine, i can feel cold rushing down my spine, she bites my lip, im stuck motionless in the moment, she puts her body tight 2 mine, A second turns 2 a minute, a minute 2 a hour, im stuck all alone in the moment, shes got wat it takes 2 make stars meet my eyes, she walks away my mouth dry nd dead my words silent, i hide under a 'plz c*m back', nw il take my life 2 make u stay.. *
d.dbelle 7/13/2007 - 5:15:04
Grp leadr: d*mn dat a gud climax, gud story poem. Fab! Keep posting *
eagleden 9/7/2007 - 3:32:08
A gud story line. I was feeling it thl the last. 2 me, it was ended 2 fast witout the rhythm of the rest of the poem. *
xpoetmcx 9/23/2007 - 9:58:19
I liked it! Plz keep posting *
supergen 11.10.07 - 02:01pm
Did it happen? *
amy.19 19.01.08 - 03:33pm
good portrayal of deep love although it's a bit dark *
