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Subject: child of hope
Replies: 6 Views: 795
bhawani9 4/18/2007 - 10:05:12
Two little eyes straining to pierce the fog/ two little hands reaching out to clear the dust on the rainbow/ two little feet trying to carve footprints on the sand - the child of hope in a bleak world. *
bhawani9 5/1/2007 - 4:37:21
nobody liked it? wrote it after my NGO's visit 2 the slum *
scar001 9/7/2007 - 12:20:00
Disappointing. Courage is much better. *
eagleden 9/7/2007 - 3:59:55
I liked wut there was of it. I wuld like 2 hear more from the child. *
supergen 11.10.07 - 02:04pm
I like it, i cAn relate, i'd like 2 hear mOre:) *
amy.19 19.01.08 - 03:29pm
it's good but the usage of the word bleak puzzles me. *
bhawani9 8.02.09 - 01:14pm
thanx folks.would add a few more.plz do keep sharing ur views.hv come here after long *
