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Subject: Pain of ones soul
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gothinic 17.08.08 - 08:19pm
Pain, pain drives us,releases us frm everything inside that connects us 2 problems,problems that push us 2 commit suicide, having the courage 2 do it, is within u 2 find in ur sub consince mind , pain, keep it close 4 it is fwend and foe 2 forever *
bhawani9 4.09.08 - 03:09pm
suicide is cowardice. *
zonna 6.09.08 - 07:43pm
2 say suicide n jst leave it at dat. Hmm. Dat means nothing. More then nothing. Its a high house. Nw 2 da poet. There is sumthn stronger then pain. Stronger then da tearz , stronger then the emptynes, stronger then life. Dats u. Lets chat n i wil tel u. All about u. *
zonna 7.09.08 - 06:01pm
Read my poem. lost soul *
zonna 7.09.08 - 06:05pm
Wow i wrote utter nonsence above. Meant 2 say 2 , 2 say suicide is a coward act n jst leave it at dat ignorant. Nt meant high hoa*se nt high house. *
6star69 9.09.08 - 05:29am
Suicide is not beautiful or romantic...it is incredibly sad n selfish... *
zonna 9.09.08 - 02:13pm
Yes i wil nt lie suicide isnt pretty. But tell sum1 suicidal dat he is being a coward doesnt help things. 2 eleminate suicide frm 1z mind is nt easy. I figur Suicide is a weak state of mind n callin sum1 chicken isnt goin 2 strenghten da mind. My arguement is words r powerful, use them responsibly n dnt judge til u have walkd a day in sum1 elses shoes. Jst once more. Poets of a 100 poets all of u have great power in yr words. U inspire, move, create magic but jst as u can do good u can also distroy. In spidermans words. With great power comes great responciblity. Mayb im readin 2much into dis *
gothinic 16.10.08 - 10:24am
Life is hard enough as it already is ,these tings take time to heal, so that u cn feel those around u , or turn against u, i thought this place was supose 2 help , bt all i c is critisizing, or lying 2 one other about how u feel about this subject *
6star69 22.11.08 - 08:05pm
Why is it so kewl to glorify n yet so un-kewl to nt share the fascination ,n wat absolutely kills me is to be judged 4 it, believe it or nt most ppl hav been touched by it! *
sexfast 19.12.08 - 08:52pm
u are all right, but the poet writes to not commit autolesionism but to storn away the pain and avoid that his fantasy becomes truth. its a magical cure that avoids the worst and leaves an empty confort inside. *
